a bit corny
wat can i say...the techno part is corny sounding...
a bit corny
wat can i say...the techno part is corny sounding...
Thank you
loop?
idk, that might b a little 2 melodic for a 5 secound loop, it seems that anyone with the ability to make sometihng like this sound good in a song can just make their own melody...
trippy
the song is rly trippy, but the rly corny melody is a bit of a buzzkill,
and its a bit repetative
sry
song quality sounds kinda bad, it sounds like its straight out of fruity loops, but to be honest ideas arent too bad, you just have to fine better samples/software instruments, the two worst sounding ones are probubly the drums and the lead voice that comes in early in the song,
but other then that not bad, its kinda weird that you put a heavier part in the song, but I guess you can say its progressive metal, but of couse then you bring up the argument that its far too simple musically for that genre, and theres 2 much synth,
i hate to be like that but i figure its better then "WOW GREAT JOB"
i found that funny because nothing i used was basic-kit FL. i think you have bad ears or something. the drums aren't from standard FL at all, and the voice was recorded... you thought it was fake? lol. that's kind of "epic fail" right there lol. XD
anyway... i dunno, i find this review pretty conflicting. :P
still, thanks for the effort!
hot damn!!!
man Im an avid metal, jazz, "good music" (depends on opinion) fan, and im rly not a big fan of this kind of....idk wat this is, but im sure you all do, its rly pop like....
anyway... the point being i hate this kind of music, but to be honest, the arrangment, recording, mastering, everything, is fantastic....
i hate this genre.... and i would love this song, I'm astounded...
and u got a nice voice for the clean and screams this is genius for amateur stuff.. trust me I would know, Ive been recording live instruments recently, and its a b*&*h to get the right sound and tone, I managed to record somthing of this quality, and it took me like 20 hours and it was only like a 30 second segment!!!
SO OVERALL, i marvel at this song, idk if ur signed but ur much better then most of the crap on the radio
a little too high
good job, still its scored a little 2 high, i mean it is just rave music, and pretty basic rave music, its not like far out crazy or original, and its not even 3 minutes
Sorry mister music judge?
what do you mean JUST rave music? Sounds a little biased if you ask me 8/.
more listenable then the first.....
no crackling this time, but now all of the energy is gone
once again, for a month+ work, this sucks
wow dude. what an amazing review!!! you are so clear about what i need to change, and you stated evidently the key elements that helped the song make top 3. dude, you probably leave the best reviews of anyone. from the bottom of my heart.... thank you very much. the world would not be the same without you. at least now you've amounted to something in life: leaving amazing reviews on people's songs.
-KDUB
cool
u recorded it a bit 2 loud so u no it crackles and such
and the piano/synth is rly basic and unoriginal,
sry to b that kid, but for a months work this sucks
you're a cool kid... how can i be as cool as you?
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The Rivers School
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