sry
song quality sounds kinda bad, it sounds like its straight out of fruity loops, but to be honest ideas arent too bad, you just have to fine better samples/software instruments, the two worst sounding ones are probubly the drums and the lead voice that comes in early in the song,
but other then that not bad, its kinda weird that you put a heavier part in the song, but I guess you can say its progressive metal, but of couse then you bring up the argument that its far too simple musically for that genre, and theres 2 much synth,
i hate to be like that but i figure its better then "WOW GREAT JOB"